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Monday 20 February 2023

"The Giver Risks Madness In The Act Of Giving" by @VioletMoonPoetry after "The Giver" by James Baldwin

Fresh scent of washed linen

a discombobulated head

Taut... ironed sheets

on a once crumpled bed 


Rain after a heatwave

thirst quenched at last 

Stars keep falling... linger

slip through milky fingers... moon’s grasp  


Oh, where art now the gentle

...their jam jars full of tears? 

Why is hate’s inharmonious echo 

...still ringing in my ears? 


What happened to empathy

...the proclivity, to be kind?

When did... to express pure altruism

label someone “out of their mind”


My eyes are wrung-out, empty 

Deep pantry shelves... are lined 

Bed’s cavernous duvet calls me

tries suffocate... hurt’s lies


The twinned, bedfellow to lonely 

shall I... forever be?

When will they see me...

past their perception’s fortified screens? 


Mirrored... is their vision 

Mired are their minds!

They project forth, inner demons 

futilely squander... pure love’s light   


Abandoned, left to meander 

Marred... misunderstood!

I'm a renegade in Mercury 

pièce de résistance, hope... my poet’s heart


For poets in wayward scramble, to unravel what to say 

we’re often at a loss... when words will not convey 

In the pause of nothingness... we learn to understand 

that the blessing is in the giving... more than at first, we comprehend 


Those of little, but of laughter... how their smiles they radiate 

When they can share... their blessings, do not try accumulate 

Materialism, round neck’s a millstone... it’s a plague that makes us weak 

And through humility’s gift, weren't we told... the earth, inherit, would the meek!


© Debbie Razey 2023 - Violet Moon Poetry




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